McNabb Elementary, 2010-2011

Mr. Payne's class knows the hallway procedures from day one!

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"I Think I Can" anthology entries by Mr. Payne's class, 2009-2010

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Nayla
My resolution is to learn to make some money for my baby sister. I need to do that because my little sister needs some diapers. If she doesn’t have on a diaper she would pee on herself. My little baby sister’s name is Syonna. If I can do just what I said, then my mommy wouldn’t be worrying. She would be so  proud of me. I think I can do this.   
 

Joshua
Sitting there.  I’m just there waiting for signups for football. I saw a boy two times my size. I thought, Will I get crushed? I signed up.  I thought I could do it. I think I can.

I did it, plus I made captain of defense.  I got a QB sack. I jumped    up and down and it was game.  My mom and dad were proud of me .We    went home and played football for ½ hour.  I   was   proud   of   myself.  That was the happiest day of my life. Then football season was DONE. I was sad, because I loved football.         

 
I Think I Can by Kestin
I think I can become a NFL player for the Pittsburgh Steelers. If I played for the Pittsburgh Steelers, I would look like an angry black man that looks like he missed lunch; an angry black man that looks like Ray Lewis with burnt eye brows. My skin color would be black as tires. On the team my position would be running back or nose guard.

The team Pittsburgh Steelers will be undefeated for three seasons straight. We would have over one million fans screaming DEFENSE! They scream, “Let’s go, defense!”  I’ll be a legend or hall of famer as number 36 Kestin McClain. They will remember the time I hit the running back so hard that he thought he got struck by lighting. All when I’m a Pittsburgh Steeler. 

                                                                   
Korie
I tried to
ride my bike
 with no training
 wheels. The
seat was pink and
I was nervous and
scared. There
 was a tree
 in my backyard,
 a little ditch. 
    I rode
 my bike down
 it and the next
 thing I know,  
I was riding
 with no hands. 
 
My face was
 nervous and my
feet were shaking
 like an icicle about to
 fall. I
 realized I am
brave, not a
 chicken so I
did it! I got
the hang of
 it.  I went
 riding with my
 friends down the
 street and had 
 lots of fun.
 
My mother said
That’s the easier way
  so you will
 learn faster!
 You know what
 I said?  I
 think I can
 and I did.
And that was a
special day+
+
 of my life!
  

I THINK I CAN by: Sebastian  
Imagining being an astronaut fills                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             
my heart with JOY. I will grow
to be one, although I’m only a
BOY. A rocket ship is not a
TOY. It’s a machine that flies
way up high. Gone before the
blink of an eye. Fly freely
rocket ship all the way to the
moon, but remember to come
back soon.

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"I Think I Can" anthology entries by Mr. Payne's class

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Julimar (Sam)
When I was 5 years old, I didn’t know how to swim. I was in Oak Glen, California at a pool. I tried to jump, but I always went back like this. Well, like you saw me. I always said I think I can, I think I can. When I said it like 100 times, my mom pushed me, and I felt like I was doing martial arts. That was the time I knew how to swim.   

 
A Famous Singer by Hope
I want to become a famous singer because I like to sing. That is my favorite thing to do. My mamma said once, “I’m trying to sign you up for America’s Got Talent.” I was shaking. I told her, “Mamma, I want to, but I have to get used to singing.” Then she said, “How about your sister singing with you?” I told her, “YES! But I have to practice first!”

After school my family was waiting on me. When I got in the car my favorite song came on. I started to sing. My mamma asked if I was ready. My family said, “Start singing.” So I started singing. They started to make a beat, so I started singing louder, just getting ready for my big day, one day to come. 

After that we went to celebrate. It was really fun because we went to the skating rink. They were playing songs and I started to sing. The person playing songs heard me singing and asked me to sing on the microphone. That let me know that I’m on my way to becoming a famous singer!


Jahkeem

The time gave myself a second chance I was in the gym playing basketball.  I said, “I think I can make a ½ court shot.” I looked at the goal and said “I think I can” again. I walked back and ran up to the ½ court mark.  I shot and Isaiah said, “Come on, Jahkeem!  I think you can!”

It was in the air.  I heard a swish noise.  “I made it,” I said. “Yes, I knew I could!” Isaiah said, “I bet that you couldn’t do it again!”  I said, “Uh, OK.” I tried it again.  I shot and I almost made it. It was circling around the rim and then it fell out. Oh well! 
 

Jamiya 
When I was at Noble Park I was trying to teach myself how to swim. I kept trying to swim. I thought to myself and said I think I can. Then the next thing you know, I was swimming! Now, any time I need to I can think to myself and say I think I can! 


Jamiya
When I grow up I think I will become a singer
I will be so scared when I am on the stage singing for all those
people. I hate singing when people are looking at me.
I would turn my face or I would close my eyes so I won’t see
that the people are looking.  
When they clap I would try to hold my smile in but I can’t
so I will smile and they will smile back.

 
Jordan 
  I was outside, it was sunny.
 I had the bag I wore work gloves,
I grabbed the bag,
 it sounded like paper.
I put leaves in, it sounded like a crunch.
I thought in my head I think I can.
 Trish helped me tie it, start over again.
 Mom saw me work.
 Trish helped me rake.
Dad was asleep.
 I was done today,
 went inside the house. 

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"I Think I Can" anthology entries by Mr. Payne's class

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I Think I Can by Audrianna
The first time  I got a gymnastics
 book I looked at
the index and saw cartwheels.
I knew that cartwheels
are related to round offs. Then
I saw how to do a round off. It
 seemed pretty easy but when I tried
it, I was so scared. My eyes were wide,
                                                        mylegs were shaking. I said to myself
    as I was running "I THINK I CAN!" People    
cheering for me. As I was running I had
my hands up as high as they could go, then I went
down and touched the ground. It felt like I was doing
 a cartwheel and when I was done my legs springed down.
That was easy, I thought! It was a piece of cake. I guess cheering did
 work and it was easy after all .
 

I Think I Can by Olivia
I think I can become a fashion designer.  I want to because I like playing dress up games on the internet, playing dress up D.S games and dressing up my dolls.  I like to daydream about me being a fashion designer   and making fancy designs.  I even like decorating houses on the internet and on my D.S games. It feels like I’m in the game dressing myself up and decorating my own house. The people in the game are fairies. In the game fairies are helping new fairies to get items to buy things. I want to be a fashion designer because it seems fun dressing up people and fairies. That is why I want to be a fashion designer.

 
Aaryan 
I think I can become a nurse. I think I can become a nurse because I love to work with people. I like to make people feel better. I would feel nauseous, and scared at the same time. I would be 21 years old. I would use a needle, and an x-ray machine. I would work at Western Baptist Hospital. If someone would come to the hospital not feeling good I would be on the job. If there were a delivery I would be on it. I would be a good person for the job. I have always said I think I can. That’s why I think I can.       
                               
Ashaun  

There it was - my bike.  My bike had red flames and it was orange. It was taller than me and it had training wheels on it. I was afraid to ride it but I got on it.
I started to go and crash! I fell! I promised myself that I would not get back on it again, but I did. I went back outside and got back on it and I did it! I rode it! I was proud of myself. I knew I could do it. After that day I would always get on my bike after school, and my dog chases me too!

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Mr. Payne’s class has spooky writing that may cause you PAIN!

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Jack o’Lantern by Isaiah
So big that you
can see from ten
feet out, and has
a big light inside.
We went to go
check it out; Next
thing I knew it
had two feet and
hopped right up and
we ran as fast
as we could.

It stuck out
its nasty arm
reached out and
grabbed Jimmy and me.
We got sucked in.
There was green slime stuff.
We tried to find
a way out
and we got out
and we blew it up. 
 
The Noise by Ashaun
In his sleep he wakes up
from the noise. A mysterious
noise and he gets up and gets
a cup of water. He drinks his water.
He goes back to sleep.
Ha, ha, ha, ha, ha!
 

The Night after School by Nayla
One day me and my
sister went to school.
All of a sudden we saw
something. it was a spider.
The teacher said, Where
is my spider? It’s out of the room.
Me and my sister both ran home and
locked the door. Then my sister said,
Unlock the door. I said, OK, but we are
going to count to 3. 1, 2, 3. Come in!
He came in and he was mysterious.
My baby sister got goosebumps. 
 

Mrs. Smith’s Spider Jewelry by Korie
Mrs. Smith came to
School with spiders
On her necklace
And earrings one day. Her earrings
And necklace moved
Everyone stopped and
Looked. Mrs. Smith became
A spider no
One knows what happened
So they went back home
She’s coming to get you.
Ha, ha, ha, ha! 
 

Alien Comes by Audrianna
I was sleeping in bed, asleep I felt like I was dead. All of a sudden I heard a noise. I went downstairs to play with my toys. Then I saw a big shadow. I know it wasn’t mine. it was very spooky. I looked in my Mom’s room. She wasn’t there! I looked in my brother’s room but he wasn’t there. I looked behind me. It was an alien in a spaceship. I screamed to the top of my lungs. Then he zapped me. I went to a strange place. When I got out I opened my eyes. I realized it was just my parents and my brother. They played a trick on me! 

 
Big Blue Monster by Jordan
The girl named Bell was going to a cave. In the cave it was big and dark and there was a big blue monster that was asleep. So Bell looked at the monster and ran to get out of the cave. The monster woke up and he saw Bell and said, “I am going to eat you!” Bell ran and grabbed a big rock and hit the monster with the rock. Bell got out of the cave and went back home. 


  
The Girl Who Saw a Ghost by Aaryan
Once there was a girl home by herself. She was so bored she went into her garage. When she got done there she saw a ghost. She screamed at the top of her lungs! She ran back upstairs and the ghost was after her. Then her parents came home. She was so scared she was shivering. Her mom asked her what was wrong. She told her that there was a ghost and her parents laughed.  They told her there was no ghost but she told them they should believe her. That night she went downstairs and opened the door to the garage. She sprayed some ghost spray and the ghost started flying away. She never saw it again and she lived happily ever after. 

 
The House on the Left by Kestin
Down the street there is a house that is haunted. One day me and my friends knocked on the door. The door opened and there was a path of candy. We followed it and it led us to a box. We opened it and a big green monster popped out and chased us! We hit it with a stick and then we made it out wearing a zombie’s head….or was it?  



The Scariest Nightmare by Jamiya
Once upon a time I was sleeping. Suddenly I was having the scariest nightmare I ever had when I was swinging at the park. Suddenly I heard a snuffling noise. I turned on my flashlight to see what was that noise. I started to walk down the dark alley to see what was that noise. Something started to chase me. I started to run really fast to my house. I was beating on the door very hard and no one answered. Then when my mom opened the door the green slimy monster disappeared into thin air. I woke up screaming. My mom rushed into my room to see what was happening to me. She said, “You just probably had a nightmare. I went back to sleep and didn’t have the nightmare again! 



My Thriller Dance by Jayden
It was Halloween night and I was out with friends. We were talking about Thriller. I notedced they were gone all of a sudden, but I knoe they were plaing so I kept on walking. Then I notieced there was someone dancing downt eh street. I said, What are you doing? but he didn’t say anything. I remembered the dance he was doing and it was called the Thriller. It was Michael Jackson with zombies. There were millions of them so I ran. Boo! then I noticed I was home…..I think!!!!


          
MJ Thriller by Jahkeen
It was one night. I was walking home. I heard something but then it stopped and started again. Something came up from the sewer. They started circling around me. They were zombies. And they yelled, “I am going to kill you!” Then it all stopped. The End. (Thriller)
 

The Little Mystery Room by Sam
Corine could not sleep. She had found a little room and opened it with her key. She got in there. SLAM! The door closed. She kept going and found a brilliant box. She looks at it. It was an ogre and she closed the door as fast as she could. She was happy and safe. 

 
Goosebumps Cat by Hope
A goosebumps cat crawling creepy and gross. It is ugly and weird. The goosebump cat looks bloody and like a mummy. It is mysterious. I started to sing a silly song. It was a Michael Jackson song named Thriller, but I sung it different. He was funny but then it started to come closer. It touched me. The next thing I was in heaven. 

How the Cat Sings Thriller
The thriller, I jumped in my pants then I had to run and would be dead now. Thriller Woohoo thrill all nighT!

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Mr. Payne's 4th Graders Write For Fun! 

Mr. Payne by Hope
Sitting in his chair
On the computer
Getting up and going
In the hallway
Standing
Coming in
Watching everyone
Asking questions
Mr. Payne loves teaching. 


 Sleepy Anniyah by Audrianna
Time to get up. I’m sleepy.
She wakes up and then bounces
Back on the bed with a big mouth,
Eyes, eye brown, zzzzzzzzzz. 
 
  
Too Small (A 3 Sentence Story) by Sebastian
Once upon a time I was at my house with my sister Lexy, my mom Jennifer, and my dad Ted.
I decided my room was too small and I wanted to make it bigger. So I gave my bed to my sister. 

 

Wall of Shame by Nayla
If you
Don’t do your
Homework you
Will get in
Trouble, OK?
Your name will
Be on the wall
Of shame.
There is no
Question to it! 
 
 
What Happened by Jayden
With eyes watering,
butterflies in my belly,
I was wondering how
to tell my mom
what happened. 
 
  
Journal Entry by Jahkeem 
It was one evening.
My step-dad had come home and said the dog died.
We buried it in our backyard.
We started crying because we had it for a long time.
It will be one year to this day. 


 
It Takes Practice by Audrianna 
 I got a F. “Oh no!” What can I do? There is only one thing to do. Practice. His mouth and his eyes so wide. 

 
The Worst Day of My Life (A 3 Sentence Story) by Isaiah
It all happened at school today. I fell and people were laughing at me. It was the worst day of my life. 


 The Wind by Sam
When the wind blows it feels like it has taken you.
The trees move.
It blows the leaves off the ground.
It takes papers from your things and rips them.
It moves your ruins your hair when it is beautiful.
It blows the old trees and they break.
It blows sometimes on your toy (doll or robot). 



 
The Graveyard (A 3 Sentence Story) by Aaryan
Once there were three girls walking in the graveyard.
They were afraid of walking there in the dark.
They saw wolves, foxes and dogs. 




 The Monster (A 3 Sentence Story) by Ashaun
The 5-year-old girl, Alexis, was asleep in the house.
Something was shaking in the closet.
She went up to it and her dad jumped out and scared her. 




Bad Hair Day by Korie
Have you ever had a bad hair day?
I have. You think
My hair is cute?
It is really nappy.
When I get it done
I scream to the top
Of my lungs! 
 
 
The Big White ___ (A 3 Sentence Story) By Jayden
I was playing outside with my brother.
I heard a growling sound and a sound like when you are thirsty.
It was a big and white ______(?!




Bibby by Sam
Bibby is so cute,
Like a ball of perfume.
She had flu
She became rude. 
 

The Spelling Test by Olivia
One day a little girl named Ashley had a big test coming up.
She always made good grades but this was a huge test and she didn’t study.
She thought it was easy; then the grade came. 

 

Squirrels by Isaiah
I was crossing a river with my family. We looked both ways before we crossed.
We didn’t see anything and so we crossed. We went across the Ohio River.
We pushed and pushed. I heard something. It was a dog.
It was barking and barking. It jumped into the water. It caught us and killed us. 



Leap by Korie
Leap is asleep.
When he jumps
To a leaf you
Hear him say
Ribbit! 
 


My Favorite Chair by Kestin
My favorite chair is a massaging chair because it is relaxing. When my back is hurting, a massaging chair will make it feel better. And it will feel good to my back. Also it feels like you climbed a mountain of peace. A mountain of peace is a place where no bullies are. Just like my favorite chair. 



Robots (A 3 Sentence Story) by Jordan
The robots named X.D and X.A saw a big robot and he looked at us.
We ran and the big robot was chasing us. We went home and we were safe. 




Baby Aleya by Jamiya
Baby Aleya is very cute.
When we were at baby
Aleya’s brother’s birthday party
My big sister was holding Baby Aleya. 
 
Because we were at the hotel in the water
She was splashing in my face because I
Was playing with her. She gets
Happy all the time.
Then she splashed water
In her face. She stopped and started
Looking at me when we were getting out
and she fell asleep sweet dreams, Aleya!
 
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