McNabb Elementary, 2010-2011

Haikus for You

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Elephants by Jakiah
Elephants are big.
Their skin is rough and light gray.
How much do they weigh? 

Japanese Dragons by Kat
Slender, long, graceful
Round teeth, thin and long
Japanese Dragons!

Everyone Loves Dogs by Brandon
Some people are nice 
to dogs, people care and share
children love dogs, too!

About My Dog by Makel
I once had a dog
His name was King, he was fun
And he had black stripes.
 

from Mrs. Smith's Class, 2010

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           The Chicken by JaQuan
There was a chicken.
She was an awesome chicken.
She laid fifteen eggs.

Snapdragon by Hailey
Snapdragon flower
sitting in the bright sunshine
swaying back and forth.

Roses by Lavonda
I smell the roses.
They can be tall, short and red.
They all smell good to me.



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Mrs. Smith's Kids Aren't Afraid of SPOOKY Writing!

If You Scream, No One Will Hear You by Skye 
 “Jimmy, dinner!” Jimmy’s mom yells.
“Coming!” Jimmy yells back.
It’s a Saturday night, Halloween night.
“Are you coming trick or treating with us?” asks Jimmy’s mom.
“No, mom.”
“Why not?” says mom.
“I’m 17, mom. I got to go. Bye.”
“Bye Jimmy.” 

“Hi Jude!”
“Hi Jimmy!”
“Hey Jimmy, let’s go to the old cheesecake factory.”
“Really, Jude, really?”
“Yes. It looks cool.”
“Fine, fine, fine. Stop talking. I’ll be right back!”

"NO! This place is creepy. Where is Jude?.....Jude?....Creeeep! What was that?!”
“Boooo!”
“Aaahhhh! Jude where did you get that mask?!”
“I don’t know, I found it.”
“What time is it ?”
“I think it’s 11:30p.m.! Let’s go get pie.”
“WAIT! The mask won’t come off!!!!”
 

Dark Blood    by Sydney             
Blood  curdling, bats  flying.  I feel dead. I’m in a cemetery. How did I get here? I feel like I’m dying. KILL, KILL, KILL I hear people  saying. ‘LET ME  OUT!!!!!!!!!!  I scream’. I hear nothing but DIE,DIE,DIE,DIE. This is not a joke you  guys. This is not funny. Can anyone hear me? Is this some kind of reality show? If it is I don’t want to play any more.

 

The Spooky Man by Tyeese   
Once upon a time the little boy was running. Micheal says,”Lets get out of here.” ”Why” says Joe. Because this place gives me the creeps. It doesn’t give me the creeps.”Well,”says Micheal let’s just get out of here. All of the sudden Joe is gone. Micheal says “Quit playing. All he hears is leaves cracking like crazy. Micheal turns around. He does not see anyone but Dr. Smith. Do you know who Dr. Smith is? He is a witch. He chased Micheal until he got out of the graveyard Then out of nowhere Joe came out and started screaming. We got out of the graveyard. We got home safely and sound. We took a shower and ate dinner and went to sleep. All that night we were thinking about where Dr.Smith was. We are always thinking about him.

 

THE War Against Vampires And Wolves by Dominique
One very dark night in a mansion a war took place.  Were wolves were locked up and were vampires live.     Vampires tease them for month.   Until one night the told the guard to go cell he walked in he got bite. The wolf that bit the guard let the wolves out.     The wolves ran into children vampires chased them .It was becoming to be day .The vampires flew away. The war was not over.

 
Explore by Javionne
In the woods nothing to do.  I heard footsteps I got up and ran. I saw a house, this house  door was open. I went upstairs someone was following me. I heard glass breaking I turned around nothing was there. When I turn back around boo. A big tall dragon was in front of me. I didn’t know what to do. Then he had me for lunch. My dad came and save me. Then he slaved the dragon. Then a creepy noise came from the closet. It was a big spider. So we ran to the car and went home.                                                       

 

 Haunted Mansion by Justin
Hi my name is Joe. I found this haunted mansion. I was walking down the hall. I saw a
Shadow, it had big bold eyes, a big mouth, a big nose and stinky breath. I was frightened.
I ran so fast, opened the door and went home.



The haunted project by KeOnna
The door opened and I heard a girl scream. I heard a barrel after the screaming stop. I start use the bathroom on myself .I hear the radio come on. I hear spooky song. Something says my name. I say what? It says I’m coming to get you. Ha ha ha ha! I like your attitude me to says me .Then the vampire says your full of blood. I’m going to keep it that way, dude.  No! Don’t run says that thing. I see a big head like a baby’s head! My project raised up and tried to hunt me down like a killer. I shot it with a gun! And I   woke up it was just a dream!

 

Stella Disappeared by Khristan
Once upon a time there was a girl Stella. Stella’s family was poor so every day Stella walked through the woods to get to the store  her family couldn’t afford  TV or news paper so they didn’t know what was loose in the woods and neither did Stella November 25 she went to the store to buy a candy bar  and as usually she went through the woods except this time it was dark and cold and Stella could barely see but half way across the woods she heard foot steps big foot step but didn’t see any one she got scared and started to walk faster  and so did the mystery creature fast fast faster she ran then with out a doubt she too off as fast as she could  with out looking back then she stopped and to her surprise so did the mystery creature and then and there she saw the store without a chance to catch her breath she dashed through the woods  stumbling and trip in falling until she realized the store was getting further and further away but when she got to the end of the woods there was nothing there  but a black hole BOOM  BOOM BOOM that instant she knew she had to make a chose but al she knew was that  thing was coming and fast so she jumped and when she landed she landed on grass  but it was blue Stella heard a voice and when she looked up there was the creature  but it was a beautiful dragon a purple dragon  what do u want from me  but the dragon said nothing but hung her head down and open a portal Stella looked in and started to cry she saw here mother tied up the dragon couldn’t speak for a wile then she said I am here to help your mother was my friend u see this is your planted and u are the queen  your are a dragon your mother never wanted to be rich because of what she sees in a mirror  what is she a dragon  like u  yes  I am afraid so  run what I said run why the dragon picked  Stella and said hold on tight and close your eyes  then one second they were in the air and in a few seconds  they were flying over green grass  then landing with a boom Stella said nothing at first then all of the sudden she started to talk so much asking lots and lots things at once so fast.  Then out of no were the dragon said my name is Agatha. Then why didn’t you just say so because I am your grandmother I am over1000 years old and you are not 10 you are 100 years old in this world where am I exactly at Agatha  said Stella your in your home Stellaville  you mean im named after this places no this place is named after you as I had said before you are a princes now enough small talk we have to get you to Edgar  whose that your father so he can get you your skin back  you are a pink beautiful dragon you are green red blue with yellow now lets get David shall we wait I had a dream about David darling it wasn’t dream he likes to watch you sleep. 

 

 The haunted laundry room by Liberty
One day I went in a laundry room and started singing la la la la la la la la la .then all I heard was GET OUT! I looked behind me nobody  was there.  I started sing  again la  la la  la la la la . GET OUT! Mom ah mom ah. Liberty what is it watch this mom la la la la la la la.  I got behind my mom boom ah ah liberty its just thunder now do your  chors if you want that alowns money .ok I sang very slowy la la la la la la GET OUT AH dady get this sico pass out of laundry room there is no GET OUT Liberty hu. who do you in this laundry room nobody .Chris yes Deon

  

The Haunted House by MaiKyha
Its  Halloween  night  and  me  and  my brother  are  going to the  most  scariest  haunted  house.  I here it’s really haunted.  Some people do not even make.  We step in know out and then it starts to thunder.  I start to scream my lunges out and now here comes the bad part. It was  there  parts  to it  here parts to it here  comes the first part  the zomby  dance.
 parts to it here  comes the first part  the zombie  dance. We step  in see its  all  dark  its like there   are real  zombies  .  It  was  flashing  lights chainsaws  and  then  the  lights went  out and that stage  was  over. The next stage was  Nurse  Killer she does heart, head, and  eye  sergy. When  you get in  you sit  down  and  they  strap  you  up hard and then  she comes out  they  its  like  were  in  a  hospital   she  has  to do sergy   on one of  us  she  picks  me.  I was so scared.  Then they cut the lights out.  Blood starts to  come  down  my  head then  its  over.  

  

The haunted school by Makayla
The little girl and boy saw a dirty school almost like an enchanted mansion.
They went in side of the school. I was tiptoe in the school.
The boor shut behind then they tried to open it but it didn’t open.
The inside was dirty everywhere. I was frightened. We went
Up stars. We herd foot steps we saw a monster. The school
Monster. The monster never went our of the school never
every. They scream HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
HA and started to run and run and run. The monster chased
them. The monster had got the girl. Then monster had got
the boy too. The had got out. Then they open the door 
 and got out. Then they went to go home. Then there is rich

 
The Scary House by Markqs
One day a girl was out walking  to the castle and she was walking on the sidewalk  and  before  she  got  to  the  forest  a  man popped  out  and  tried  to  kidnap  her  and  she  was  frightened  and  she  ran  as fast  as  she  could  when  she  got  to  the  forest  their  was  scary  sound  and  she  was  hysterical  too  she  was  still  in  the  forest  she  saw  scary  stuff  and  she  was  out  of  the forest  in  a  hairy  she  was  at  the  castle  then  she  was  shock. 

 

The Night Of Halloween by Maurice 
Hey T.J you coming trick or treating? Yes I am.
Hey! What are you doing freak?
The guy is wearing a black hat with a knife
With sharp teeth. Dude run. No. Run! He hopped on
The bike and pedaled  as fast as a cheetah.
This has got to be fake! AAAAAAAAA! Go! Go!  Go!
Ha Ha! Wait. Where did he go? Wait he is behind me isn’t he? mhmm.
Run! AAAAAA! Run! Run! Run!

 
Haunted Cave by ROMAN 
One d
ay me and my parents went on vacation, we were going camping in the forest, after dinner I told my parents that I wanted to take a walk, after that I was walking and thinking if I could find a cool cave but it was dark and I started walking home then I saw a cave it looked spooky and I started walking in, and suddenly I heard footsteps I looked behind me and saw the grim reaper and his pet Dracula, he was a dragon and swallowed me up whole, I was never seen again. THE END

Mrs. Smith's 4th Graders Keep Writing!

Drama Queen by Tyeese
From the bars, off the slide first.
And I land on my bottom.
Not in the grass, but in the sand.
That day I had to walk with sand in my pants
and when I went home I was crying all day. 



Mrs. Smith by Tyeese
Mrs. Smith is mad.
She was as mad
as if the earth was
on fire.
She was tapping
her foot like she
was stomping.
She was mad
about our test scores.
What to do.
Just do it right.
But I don’t know how
to.
 
 
We Were Cleaning (A 3 Sentence Story) by Alex   
I was cleaning my toys and I found a spider. I put it on my mom. She ran like Superman.

 
My Own by Ke’Onna
I am so hopeless.
Let me ask you a question.
Would you like to be hopeless?
No? So that’s how I feel.
I would like to stop being hopeless. 
I would like to be normal.
I would like to be free from being helpless.
You are so lucky.
You are so lucky to me. 


Running Home (A 3 Sentence Story) by Dominique
It was Gang Boy picking on kids and the other gang boys picking on kids, too.
When the streetlights came on they were gone.
The only thing you felt was wind. 
 
 
Too Late! By Roman
My heart pounding, looking
around the corner for the
robber.  I walked around the
corner and started looking around
for him then
BAM! BAM!
My heart stopped and I
fell to the floor. I looked
at my leg. It was bleeding.
I got up and ran as
fast as a racecar and
Jumped out the window
as the ambulance picked
me up and the police went
inside and found the robber.
I’m glad I was not
dead yet.
BAM! The robber
shot the window
of the ambulance. 
 
 
Guess What? (A 3 Sentence Story) by Javionne
My sister was playing. I put a centipede on her. Guess what? 
 
 
In Trouble by Javionne
Mrs. Smith looking around the
room, heard Sammy talking.
She got her pen and moved
back and forth. We heard the
pen click. 
 

Ice Storm 2009 by Makayla
As I was watching last year’s Biggest Loser the power went off. I felt scared.
So we went to my cousin's house. I felt a little bit sad but I was happy because we got to go to our great great Grandmother’s house because she had power. 2 weeks later our power came on. 


 
My Little Puppy (A 3 Sentence Story) by Sydney
I had a puppy.
I wanted to keep it.
I blinked and it was gone. 
 

Mrs. Smith and the Open Responses by Sydney
Mrs. Smith sitting at her
desk grading our open responses. After
awhile she gets a clean open
response, sits in her chair.
She starts talking LOUD. Uh-oh!
She’s mad!


The Teenager Came Home Late (A 3 Sentence Story) by Justin
A
 teenager told her mom that she would be home before dinner.
It was 9:00 and her mom was mad.
When the teenager got home she crept up to her room but her mom caught her and she was in trouble. 



The Mad Teacher by Justin
Mrs. Smith was mad. I
can tell by her tapping her
feet. They went up and down fast.
Smoke came out of her ears.
Her face turned like a volcano.
Her head was going to explode! 
 
 
Candy Shop (A 3 Sentence Story) by Skye
There I was. William B. Firm. I made it, yeeeeeeesss! 
 

Ride Him Cowboy (A 3 Sentence Story) by Sammy
A tornado was coming. I had a whip and a rope. I threw the rope on the tornado and rode to New York. 

 
The Sleepover (A 3 Sentence Story) by Maikyha
Today is the day for my sleepover & the last day Tiffany will pull a trick on me; here she comes with her posse. 
That night I was the first to go to sleep.
Uh-oh, here comes the whipped cream! 



The Bad Day by Maikyha
As she
looked at
me with
hands crossed
and tapping
her feet. 
 
I was
scared as if
someone
had
just broken
in. I
was scared.
I thought
she was 
going to
woop
me. Here
comes
the whoopen!

 
 
Mrs. Smith by Skye
Looking around the room
Looking in her journal.
Writing in her journal.
Looking up then down.
And writing more in 
                           her journal.
First one to raise her hand.


Big Hit by Sammy 
 On the one yard line.
We are up by one with 50
seconds left.  I was playing corner.
I had the wide side. Everybody was
screaming,  “Let’s go, Sammy!” I
was excited. It was my time.
I knew the play. We WON! They
jumped on me. I as a pancake!
Heath-45; 46-Tornado! 
 

 
Hair in the Eye by Maurice
No wind just hand
movements getting hair out
of the eye. So long
it hurts the eye. 
 
 
A 3 Sentence Story by Ah’Davieon
There he is – swimming. He looks up and stares. 34 eyes looking at him!
 
 

Another 3 Sentence Story by Ah’Davieon
He got off the bus and walked quickly to the house.
Crackling and ripping plastic could be heard.
The twinkie disappeared in 5 seconds.



Help by Khristan 
Once upon a time I sprung my ankle at the community center after dance practice one night. My Dad was picking me up. When we got outside boom bam pow! I tripped. I rolled down the steps down the concrete and into the street. My Daddy picked me up. He tried to get me to stand up but I couldn’t so he carried me like a princess. He put me in the car and took me home. Then the next morning he took me to the doctor and they said I sprung my ankle so I didn’t go to school. Instead I stayed with my Daddy for about a week. Well, actually school wasn’t in so it was a vacation. But I was still taken care of. 

 

Sammy and Me Today (A 3 Sentence Story) by Markqs
Sammy came to my house and played with my dog.
After that we rode a dirt bike around Circle Park and played wheel man on the bikes.
Then mom yelled at us for doing something that we should not have done. 


 
The Baby’s Coming! By Khristan
Kick, Kick, Kick
the baby inside
mom. Ow, it’s
coming. No,
the baby’s upset. 
  Kick, Kick, Kick
   Stop. Make
     it stop. Kick, 
      Kick, Kick, 
         Kick, I think
            she’s done!
 
 

Mrs. Smith’s Bad Day at School by Markqs
One day Mrs. Smith was
 talking to the class
  and she was mad
   at us. Then she said,
    “Stand up now and don’t
      say a word at all!”
       She said, “Tell me 
        something that you
         really need to say!”
          They all said uh…uh…uh
           …uh o nothing right
             now. I will shut up now, ok?
 
 

Barney Slippers by Liberty
When I was two and I loved Barney, me and my mom went to Wal-Mart.  I saw Barney slippers. I really wanted those Barney slippers. I yelled, screamed and cried. My mom said, “What is it?”

I grabbed the Barney slippers and gave them to my mom. She said, “No. Too much money, Liberty.”
I started to yell and scream and cry again when an old man came over and said, “Oh look at that baby girl with that curly hair and afro. Why is she crying? She wants those Barney slippers? Oh. Does she want a sucker?” 

I don’t know why he unwrapped the sucker and gave it to me but I threw it at his nose and he said, “Well, I guess she doesn’t want that!”